Omg Distance, you draw so much XD I turn away from my inbox for a while, come check your page randomly, and BAM! Lotsa new stuff. Anyway, its very cute. I think the violin is drawn quite nicely (and colored) I think her face has a really odd shape though. Like too rounded and squished, and as if the chin is slightly in the wrong place or something. And (it may just be my computer's lighting) I feel like there should be more detail/shading down her shirt, where her chest and the buttons are. Like creases or something.
Haha yeah! I've been on such a roll lately, I always have something to upload now, it seems XDD Thank you very much <33 I agree about her face, it's driving me crazy and I couldn't figure out how to fix it lol. Like it's on an odd angle or something.
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa *-* Kotomi-chan *-* I am watching Clannad after story right now, so that picture makes me happy. <3 I really like Kotomi xD <- aww Clannad *O* But she can't play the violin well xD Shh! Don't say that Kotomi-chan ^-^; .. XD I love the way you drew her, she looks really awesome! The school uniform is well done! I also like her violin <3 The hair is so pretty and I like the way, you drew her face so cute x3 I think i love all in this picture :3 And you have to watch Clannad and the After Story~ cute and sometimes funny :3 But really sad too! Everybody said, that they have to cry, I didn't but it was sad xD
May I give you suggestions on the violin tho? Overall, the structure looks really well drawn, just make sure its body is a little thinner (as in chin to shoulder length). Also, the strings should be bent at the bridge (the small piece between the two f holes), which will make a mountain like appearance. And finally, the bow should be perpendicular to the strings. ^-^
lol I'm a violin player and I just can't help noticing these things I hope I'm not too much a bother >_< sorry sorry sorry